The world abruptly stood still At a time when it thought It had become invincible - A shadow’s savage blow Brought it to its knees Hit its heart with searing pain And rendered its body immobile While its eyes were forced to watch The carnage of this lifetime.
“A shadow’s savage blow”: that’s right. Like the way you personified the world as a whole and then the ending lining was dead on. Hope things improve and 2021 is a much improved year!
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Thank you for appreciating the aspects of this post that I also really like. And the pun on ‘dead on’ (whether meant or not 😅) is a killer.
I hope the very same – may all be better soon.
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Welcome. Puns are something else. Better soon. Yes!
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